Hello, Everyone! I wrote a…

Hello, Everyone! I wrote a piece from The Hub Challenges Archive Challenge #3- Picture This.

  • Do you think I should have made the words rhyme?
  • Does it allow for readers to understand my main points accurately if it doesn’t rhyme?
  • Should I stop writing from a 1st person perspective?

I would love to hear what others think about this piece. I have a hard time creating good titles and often feel like I ramble too much when writing what I consider poetic pieces.

http://nevertoobroken.com/2015/03/26/manically-invested-in-the-race-of-the-unknown/

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