Feedback for my post!

Hello everyone !

I have a new post.

https://valiantwarrior.wordpress.com/2015/02/07/thankful-heart/

I would like to ask few questions

1. Does the reference to the story conveys the essence of the meaning of “thankful heart”?

2. What other title you’d like to suggest for this post?

3. Is it short? Does it convey the message properly.

4. Any grammatical mistake and any suggestion for sentence formation?

Regards

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