Garden of People :two requests…

Garden of People :two requests for feedback: is the child’s question accessible to those who may not have read much Kipling and his ilk? second – use of present tense over a 40 year gap – is it confusing? My intent is to be timeless. Thanks in advance

https://neerja2014.wordpress.com/2015/02/06/garden-of-people/

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