Realised Fairy Tale (part five)

Hmmm. This reads like a travel guide. (San Francisco holds a special place in my heart. Magic happens there!)
Does the long saga of the exploration of the environs detract from the story?
If you have never been to SF, can you still appreciate the tale?

https://littlelearner.wordpress.com/2015/02/03/realised-fairy-tale-part-five/

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