Hello, All!

I have been crazy-busy of late (work mostly), so have fallen asleep with my face on the keyboard before I could write anything. This piece was compiled over the course of the last week — two paragraphs one night, three more the next. I wanted to record an experience I had with my daughter.
I believe this piece would work better in third-person. What do you think?
And since, once again, it is after midnight, I bid you all a fond good night. 🙂
Thanks for reading.