Song of the Day – no more Duets

This one is more memoir than it is about the song, but it’s a moment in my life that I will never forget.  This song came up on my iPod today at the gym and so I figured that it was time to tell its story.

Feedback –

1.  What more does the reader need to get into this moment?

2.  Does the ending feel as rushed to you as it does to me?

Many thanks.  I grow from every comment left.