Here’s chapter 4 of How…

Here’s chapter 4 of How was Last NIght for You. I am wondering is the conversation between Nina and Tiff to repetitive of what has already gone on? Is the love scene between John and Nina necessary, that was hard to write, do I need it? Any other comments welcome.

https://mandibelle16.wordpress.com/2015/01/08/how-was-last-night-for-you-with-john-and-later-lunch-with-tiff/

Amanda

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