Making Pies

Okay — I took my own challenge. 🙂
Herewith one of my favourite songs and my explanation of why I like the song so much.
I want to write like this. Simple words, but profound portraits.
What do you think? Do I use too many words to express my love of the simplicity of this piece?
I wasn’t very creative with my presentation, but perhaps it is a springboard?
Hope you enjoy it.