Deepest Treasures (part twelve)

Here it is — the final chapter. I rushed it a bit to finish the story so that I can concentrate on Longform in Writing 201.
Does the story come to a good and logical conclusion? Do you see how the story shifted from Ann’s tale to Mark’s? Does it hold your attention?
Thanks, all, for your suggestions and help!
http://littlelearner.wordpress.com/2014/12/02/deepest-treasures-part-twelve-the-final-chapter/

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