Grammar Ghouls Writing Challenge

Hey all,

I decided to participate in my first Grammar Ghouls Writing Challenge, and I wrote a short story based on the prompt. I wanted to share with you guys to get your feedback on it: was the story captivating, or was it boring to read? Did it introduce enough info for you as the reader to grasp what was going on, or was it too vague and confusing? ~>

Also, in case anybody is interested in the Writing Challenge, here’s the link to the site! ~> The challenge ends Sunday noon, I think, so you still have some time to submit something if you’d like! 🙂

Hope everyone’s having a great Thanksgiving weekend!