My Challenge 4 –

I had problems deciding on the ending. If you can think of a good ending for this story, please let me know. This is definately a work in progres and I welcome any suggestions.

1. Did I keep the same tense throughout the story?
2. Do you see where I need to change words or sentence structure?
3. Is my grammar correct and my writing style okay?
4. Any ideas for a good ending?