Comment on my post!

Hi Everyone,

I have a new post

http://valiantwarrior.wordpress.com/2014/11/16/my-beautiful-world-map/

1. need comment on my writing style and the sentence structure.

2. How can I make the following para more beautiful?

The warmth of sunshine in Central America is not different to me. Now,the experience of shoveling snowfall in Canada is not new to me and finally the question of that last unexplored part of Antarctica is no more mystery to me.

3. If I’m posting a pic from Google is it necessary to write “Google Image”?

Love to have your Feedback

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