Deepest Treasures (part seven)

I hope this part helps connect the reader to Ann in a closer way.
I battled writing for Ann. I want the reader to understand how difficult it is for Ann, but I don’t want to interrupt the flow of the language too much. What do you think?
Thanks to those of you who are along for the ride. I appreciate you!
https://littlelearner.wordpress.com/2014/11/11/deepest-treasures-part-seven/

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