Here’s the full version of micro-memoir #5: Tweedle Dee (and the Other One)
Feedback requests (please don’t feel a need to respond to all…I’ll take anything) –
1. This is about two of my childhood friends. The lead suggests that we’ll focus on one of them, but it turns out to be the other. Is that a problem?
2. The ending comes up fast and feels rushed. Do I need to ease into the pool a bit slower?
3. This is my adult self writing about my life as a pre-teen. Does the voice work without compromising the quality of the writing?
4. Am I kidding myself that anyone would care enough about the budding of a friendship to want to read 3000+ words about it? (please don’t let the number scare you)