Travel Writing

I posted my first piece of travel writing on my blog: http://loopylozzie.wordpress.com/2014/11/04/the-shenanigans-of-train-journeys/ and I was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback:

1. Do you feel as if I should have researched into the places more?
2. Did I go on too much about the train journey?
3. Could I have talked more about the places I visited?
4. Could my description be improved?

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