Hello everybody, I just posted…

Hello everybody, I just posted the new part of my short story A Glimpse Of Summer.

My question is: do you find the single scene dragging, would you as a reader prefer to read a story that is more straight to the point?

Also, if you have read the previous parts (if you haven’t, no worries, there are links 😉 ) would you like to see Summer back In the story?
Thanks In advance 🙂