Deeper Treasures (part four)

I’m avoiding ironing. 🙂 I posted this tonight. I hope you all don’t mind me sharing here. If you have time I’d love any suggestions. Are the mechanics okay? Have I used the correct punctuation to help the reader understand what’s going on? Does it continue to hold your interest, or is it getting tired? Okay — ironing now.
Thanks.
https://littlelearner.wordpress.com/2014/11/03/deepest-treasures-part-four/

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