A survey is just what…

A survey is just what I need to get feedback for revising the beginning of a story! I shared Episode 1 with my local writing group yesterday. Sadly, they could only see it as a book in print, none of them read digital stories. I hope I get specific useful information from my online readers. I embrace the idea of an interactive story, developed with my readers’ input. Here’s the brief story intro, revised since I first published it on my blog. The survey is at the end of the post. What do you think?