I’m working on turning a…

I’m working on turning a novella I wrote about 5 years ago into a full length novel now and have been posting the finished part (which is the beginning fourth or so of the novel) on my blog. Here’s the first part: https://amiecuscuriae.wordpress.com/2014/09/01/the-gods-defense-revised-part-1/. What do you guys think of the scene as a beginning? Does it put you in the action while still orienting you to the world you’re entering?

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