Good Afternoon, I posted a…

Good Afternoon, I posted a short story How was Last Night For You a little while ago and decided to take it further. So here is Chapter 2. If you haven’t read part 1 it is linked into the story at the beginning.

Looking for general feedback. Does this flow with the first part of the story? Do you want to read more? Do I describe enough about the characters to make them interesting? Does enough happen to keep you interested?