Good Morning! Ode to Out-of-focus…

Good Morning!
Ode to Out-of-focus Button

Since my Letter to Autumn, I tried to write a poem. I haven’t really written a poem in a while, only pasted bizarre one’s together for fun when I have writer’s block.

Questions:
1) Does this poem work as a poem? What is it missing? How do I gain style points here?
2) Do you suggest a poem recipe or format to try instead of this free-form? And/or poem book to read?
3) Capitalization in poems- one must always capitalize the first line even if it’s not the beginning of a sentence?

Thank you!
Wa’am

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