Challenge #1 – Dear Me

My assignment submission for the week of October 21, 2014

http://pricelessjoy.co/2014/10/22/oh-dear-dear-me/

1.  Is there any wording in my post that needs to be changed to make the post more enjoyable for the reader?

2. Are there word choices that could have been better had I used them? If so, what words would be better to use?

3. Does it make sense – or is it too silly?

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