We learned in Writing 101…

We learned in Writing 101 to be thrifty with our words in one of the challenges. I wrote this on the plane this past weekend and spent a good deal of time cutting it down to the core. My fear is that I cut it down to the point where it makes almost no sense. I want the reader to have questions (and to leave room for his/her own interpretations and connections), but I don’t want to leave the reader with a frustrated “huh?” Did I leave too much of this in my head? Thanks.